Hysen

Colegio.

Te aconsejo agregar algo de sombreado e iluminación, se ve plano a comparación del original. Juega a manipular los colores de vértice a través del software que hayas utilizado para editarlo, se verá mucho mejor.

Although it has a few noticeable bugs I found, it still looks quite impressive, do you have any plans to expand that area?

Would be really cool

The first one is Kurumi, the second one is not simply Rin Shibuya with some variations that you made on it?